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Wednesday, May 10, 2017

a blacksmiths story

once there was a young blacksmith named Fredrick he finally had enough gold to buy an anvil. so he reapred a sword and he got 23 gold  and he bought  bred  and some  books and 1 metal he went home and ate bred and went to bed. when he woke up he went outside and he fond a cow and he put it in his backyard and he sold 2 milk cups he got 34 gold  and he saw a maige and the maige was going to destroy the king. and Fredrick ran at the marge and with one mighty swing the marge was no more Frederick got magic staff  4 magic and 2 fitness  Fredrick made a sword he got 12 gold and 5 experience  Fredrick made shield and a axe the axe was good a wood cater came in and bought the axe Frederik got 32 gold Frederick went to bed. and then he decided that he shall go on a mission for the king the king will give Fredrick 500 gold if Fredrick. fights the giant and wins so Fredrick went off and he went to the cold stone arena it was the home of the giant and Frederick threw his axe that he made 1 hour and 23 Min's ago and he used his Battle axe and sliest the giant's heed off but some thing did not feel right
goblins! Frederik  was corned then... 


6 comments:

  1. Hey Regan, it is great to see that you have written so much! I am wondering why you wrote this story! I also really want to know what is behind the black bits!!!! When will I know?

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  2. Hey
    Regan
    That story was awesome
    Hope you write some more storys like that.

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  3. Hi Regan, Fenix here.
    I enjoyed the part when you covered some parts of the story, it looks like a mistery!
    Did you think about covering more of the story?
    To improve, you could turn some of the captial letters and turn them into lowercase letters.
    Goodbye!

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  4. Hi Regan Kaunteya here from rata class.I like the story that you writed about.But there like hundreds of ands also all of your letters were capital.But I still can't wait to see the next but of the story.Bye.

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  5. WOW! Noah here good jobi was waiting forthe black bits to open BYE!!!!!!!!!

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